Here's an attempt to tweak my character's design a bit. What do you think about altering the design so that the character is wearing pants? It changes the profile quite a bit so I thought I would run it by you before I get into color and action. I felt that the original dress design made her look more "fluffy" than I would want in a world-saving hero. So I rolled up her sleeves, replaced her necklace and generally tried to make her look more action-ready and capable. Anyway, let me know what you think. If you want to keep the original profile, I can work off of #2 with some tweaks as I figure out movement and flow.